Monday, February 17, 2014

Imaginary Eden?

What is your imaginary Eden?
[prompt #539 got a remake]

9 comments:

  1. My imaginary Eden would be at a Pierce The Veil concert. Pierce The Veil is one of my favorite bands and I've only seen them once, which was almost two years ago, and I'd like to see them again. At the concert, everyone obviously likes them and can easily get along. Not only can everyone get along there but also sing along to songs together. It may sound weird to sing along with strangers, but it's a good feeling to know that you can sing along to songs with others. A Pierce The Veil concert is one of my Edens because it's a place where everyone has something in common and overall have a really fun time.
    My second Eden would be my room. In my room, I can listen to music, read or do anything I want without having to be bothered. I can basically do anything I want in my room, plus it has all my favorite things in it. My favorite things would include my CDs, my guitar, my stretch book, and my tablet. I can be doing anything with those things and I can be at piece with it. Also I can close my door so I really won't be bothered.
    My third Eden would be at a big open park full of snow. I can lay down in the snow, listen to my music with my head phones, or possibly just walk around and think about things. I pick the snow because I love winter, especially the amount of snow there is outside right now. I can imagine myself alone, no one having to bother me. It'll be peaceful and beautiful to see the amount of snow on a big open park.
    -Jocelyn Torres

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  2. My imaginary edan would most likely be in my room because if it was in my room then i would able to relax like watch tv and play video games and if i had time i would sleep which i would have time because i would be doing anything because it would be a place where i didnt have to do anything and i would only be there so that i could relaxs.
    This also my imaginary edan because if i was in my room then that means that there would be no dress code and i could wear what ever i wanted to when i could wear what ever i want then that mean that i dont have someone saying that what i wearing dosent match and that i should change it wouldnt matter anymore so if there was no dress code it would make me feel better about myself because no one can tell me you dont know how to dress.
    this place is also my imaginary edan because when im in my room then i could do what ever i wanted to do and not have anyone tell me that i should do something like homework go to sleep etc. when im in my room no one can tell me i cant do that or just do this no because there are no rules when im in my room, and when im in my room i dont have to move as much as i would if i wasnt in my room that why my room is my imaginary edan
    -brandon cerero

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  3. My imaginary eden would be me in california where the climate is never changing . Everyone would be relax on the beach in the hot sun. the religion would be of any kind. it dont matter what's your religion anybody and everybody is welcome to the beach. people can dress the way that they would feel that is most comfortable for them. It really don't have to be a specific clothing. The landscape would be blue skies and sand, where people laying all across the sand having fun with one another. playing different activities.

    Another reason why my eden would be in california because california would be the best state for most people to relax in because you wouldn't hear as much as noisy as you would hear in chicago, you wouldn't have to worried about the shootings or bad things that happens in chicago because you would be in california enjoying your time at the beach and playing in the water and doing different activities with different people such as , volley ball. thats a fun sport to play when you're at the beach , also making silly faces with the sand or just throwing the sand in the water.

    In addition to why i would want my eden to be in california because california has many, many beaches you can attend instead of going to the same one every day you can go to others ones and meet new people and play different activities as well the beaches wouldn't be far away from each other, some people walk because its not that far and others might drive if they too lazy to walk, but if it was up to me i would prefer walking because walking is good thing to do since, a lot of people do it anyways, some people sometimes sleep on the beach because it helps them to relax and helps them to think and helps them gets a lot of stress of the mind by having fun and doing what people loves doing best.
    ambersmtih

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  4. In my Eden the weather is warm. Its not hot but not cold either.The way to get around is by flying cars. Our source of natural power would be using electricity. The language that would be spoken is German,English,Italian,and Russian.The public statues are all dedicated to bands that have saved lives.
    Every kind of ethnic groups are welcome. Public entertainment would include punk,alternative,and metal bands. dubstep djs are included as well. For public information people would have to go to the internet to find out whats happening in the world. Everyone will be free to practice any religion they want.
    the formal dress is band t-shirts and other kinds of band merch. The landscape of my Eden is a happy one where the grass is green and the girls are pretty( a line from paradise city by guns n roses). The size of the capital is so big that there is no number big enough to measure the intense size.The government would be a good kind of government that will do their best to help make the Eden as metal as it can be.-Jafet Mendoza

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  5. There are many ideal places that people consider their own paradise. Some people might say its tropical or sunny or maybe something close to home like at the park or even in their room. But mine is very unusual. The reason i say that it is unusual is because my place of paradise would be somewhere to relax all day and absorb the sun, yes it will be sunny, but i wont be relaxing in it, i'll be playing sports all day.

    The way that i would want this to be seen is in a very big open space with miles of room for non-stop playing of whatever sport I want. I wouldn't want to be alone of course, I would want to be with friends and family to join me on the events that occur. I wouldn't want to be alone because for one, you need competition, and two, you need team maets.


    So you might be thinking at this point, why would you want to play sports in paradise? Well the thing is, for me, this is my paradise. The one thing that I love about sports is the competitiveness, camaraderie, and sportsmanship. The reason is, is because i think it brings people together to build a stronger and more powerful bond with one another.
    Erik Sandoval

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  6. My imaginary eden would be in a beach that has a warm climate, a lot of safe animals that when we are hungry we can cook and eat, clean pure water, a clear sunny sky, and surrounded by only a lot of my favorite and prefered people. The people would have to like the stuff that I like to do and want to do. I would also want the people to talk a lot and to be able to fly and swim really fast. Then I would like the people to be medium height and to speak the same language. I would like the people to know how to build houses and know how to play sports.

    The beach would have our neighbors from outer space visit us and bring us new, cool souvenirs once a month. The creatures from outer space would have to be friendly and be really tall and have cool super powers like telekinesis and super strength. The creatures would also have to have fun with us and teach us new sports and body tricks. Then the creatures will have to take us to their home planet and show us their world. They will have to show us new animals and their paradise and their homes.

    All the animals in the beach have to know how to talk, have manners, and they will all have to have wings and be able to read and eat with their hands. The animals will all have to be really cool and big like, elephants and cheetahs, lions and rhinos and many other cool land animals. The animals will only eat plants, they will have to know how to play sports and how to make sand castles. The animals will also have to take a shower in the water and they will have to know how to make fires and play instruments. Whenever we don’t have good clothes the animals will have to allow us to shave their fur in order for us to be warm at night.

    Yeshua chavez, night school.

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  7. My imaginary eden would be in Puerto Rico bacause the weather is beautiful through out the year. I'm tired of all the snow every year I'm not a winter person . I love to be in the heat. It's also a very different culture from out here. I never get to express my own culture and I think it would be wonderful. I also have family out there. I would love to move my whole family out there because I want it to be drama free!
    Everyone would go to the beach everyday to enjoy the nice weather.I would go out to the rivers and water falls because there so beautiful the water is nice and cold. I would maybe build a farm out there because everyone out there has there own cows,chickens,lams ect. I would also build my own house next to my great grandmothers house. I would also help build schools out there cause theres not that much for the kids that want to learn out there
    I would like to have any culture out there I think it would be wonderful.Puerto Rico is a wonderful place to tan and also go shopping.I would go broke out there .I would drive out to every little pueblo out there to have a taste of each culture. I would cook there food everyday cause it so good. I would just have a ball out there .
    - Jelissa Rodriguez

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  8. My imaginary Eden is not so imaginary. Why? Because I have been there and it is a great place that i love to spend time at. It is a place where I've been camping at with other friends and people. It is a very big and special camping site for me and I would love to spend as much time possible there. It is called Owasippie. Some of the things I would change about Owasisppie is the people who go, climate, rules, and some other small things.

    I would change the people who go to Owasippie because there some people who go and can get quite annoying. And that is not something I would want in my Eden. Te people I would for them to go are some friends from my old school that I still talk to. Also some friends m=from school now, but not everyone. There are some people that are more enjoyable to be around with than others. Still it would be nice for other people to be around in different sites because I would like to meet new people as well.

    At Owasippie there are a lot of fun tings that you can possibly do. From just taking a hike to swimming, Horseback riding, and riffle shooting as well as shotgun shooting. All of these activities are what make this place special and fun to be at. I was there for two weeks about two years ago. Time past so fast that when it was time to leave I did not want to at all. I actually felt kind of sad when I knew that we had to leave and was not gonna be able to possibly go back till next summer. And I din't even go to go last year.

    Another thing I would like to change is the climate. Just because when I was there and , from what I've been told, every year there is a rain storm. That is a bad thing because the floor is sand and dirt. That causes for there to be puddles to be everywhere. Also it sometimes gets too cold and I only like the cold where i can wear a sweatshirt and sweatpants to stay warm. Yet, I like for it to be warm during the day so It is a comfortable weather to wear shorts and go swimming.

    Another big thing that I would like to change at Owasippie are the rules. Mostly is that you are always suppose to be at a station. And I do not like that because sometimes I feel like just staying at the camp site resting or sleeping since we always stay up late by the fire. Or sometimes we just do not have anything to do. We can't even go back to camp if we forgot something. Which can get really annoying since there is a lot of things you have to remeber to bring cause ou need it. or just want it.

    Still it is a place I love going to and spending time at. I get to have some time away from home and not have to deal with everyday problems. Also I do not have to listen to my mom or nearly anyone. So that gives me a lot of freedom and a sense of being able to see a lot of things that you or anyone else will be able to see again. Those are one in a lifetime moments that I love to have. And there are a lot of things that you can always see, however, a lot of people do not and it makes those places special.

    Miguel Flores

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  9. Sylvester stevenson / night schoolFebruary 18, 2014 at 3:09 PM

    If I had an imaginary Eden it would be in the forest.It would be in the forest because I really love the forest. It would be fall because its my favorite time of year. My Eden is by a lake because I think it would be beautiful.The size of my capital wouldn't be too big because there would not be enough room for other things.That is what my Eden would look like.
    There will be many ethnic groups in my city.People will also be able to have their own religion.There will be the same type of government as the USA.I think this will be more effective for the growth of my city.The highest rank in the government would be the president,then the vice president and so on. There will be law enforcement in place to make sure that everyone is safe.
    People will move from place to place by animal drawn carriages.I chose this way because I think it would be fun.The buildings will all be the hand of the people that live there.The look of the buildings are personal and comfortable for the people that live there because they will have built them themselves. I decided to let my people build their home them selves because i think they would appreciate the house more and would want to take care of it.
    I want the fashion of my people to be unique.The formal dress of my people would be professional dress.We'll host a fashion show to see who is the best dressed. I want people to say how awesome we look.If people want to look up the history of my Eden or just for public information they can ask me,the elders of my city, or they can just visit the history museum.There will be a statues of me and all who helped make my Eden possible. There will also be a theater where some of Shakespeare most famous play will be performed.
    That is what my Eden would be like.

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